Könnte jmd. sich meine Statistik analysiere bitte angucken?

Hallo, ich bin in der 9.klasse und schreibe bald eine Englisch Klausur, wo ich eine Statistik analysierieren muss, daher habe ich zu dieser Stastik auf dem Bild, eine analyse geschrieben und wollte fragen, ob sich jmd. diese angucken kann und schreiben könnte, was ich hätte besser machen können...? Wäre wirklich sehr nett und hilfreich!! Dankeschön schonmal im voraus:)

Meine Analyse zu der Statistik:

"This table gives us information about the amount of pocket money per week in diffrent states like Germany, Turkey and the UK. It is divided in diffrent categories: kids under 5 age, kids from 5 to 10, 10 to 15 and 15-plus. If you compare the UK with germany you can see that kids under 5, 5 to 10, 10 to 15 or 15-plus get always more money than kids in germany, which isnt really suprising because I heard from many people that things in the UK are way more expencive than things in Germany. The table also shows that in the UK kids from the age 10 to 15 get the same pocket money as kids from the age 5 to 10, which is if you compare this with kids, the same ages in Germany and Turkey really intresting, because in this states kids who are older get more money. The table you can see gives us the information that the older kids become, the more money they get and I think its because of the rising costs the older you get, I mean if you compare the costs of a T-shirt or something else for kids under 5 years and kids from 5 to 10 you notice that it costs more for the kids from 5 to 10."

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Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

 

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

 

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

 

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